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Thursday, 23 May 2019

T2W4 Writing

This week we have been doing information writing we had to writer  about  something that we were interested in . Lots of people  chose dogs and so did I. Here is my writing. Please leave a comment.

Hi my is Riley and I am going to talk about dogs. The three different types of dogs I chose are ting to inform someone about a topic you know. E.g. Miss Clark knows lots about dogs so she is going to write about the different types of dogs!
Use your planning sheet to help you write your ideas do Huskies, Labradors and Pugs.


Huskies live in snow because they belong there and they work as sled dogs. Huskies are friendly and like playing around. They are fluffy because then they won’t get cold and they have two layers of fur to keep them warm.

Labradors  like to run  fast and they like playing.  Labradors like to play with dog toys balls, sticks and squeaky toys. They are affectionate with family and are incredibly kid friendly dogs so they make a good pet! Labradors can’t eat chocolate, sultanas, raisins, or grapes because they will get sick.

Pugs they have a black nose and they have a curly tails. I think pugs look cute. Pugs are good with family and kids, and it is easy to groom their hair! Pugs are very playful animals so they need lots of toys and maybe another dog friend to play with!

I hope you have learnt something about dogs! My favourite dog is a pug because they look cute!




                                   
    

2 comments:

  1. Hi Riley:) I am Kade but you already know this.
    I really like how you did writing about dogs.
    What is your favorite dog?
    Maybe next time you could tell why chose these dogs.
    Well I will see you next time.
    Your big bro Kade


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  2. I learnt a lot about dogs Riley. Great job!!
    Pugs are very cute.
    Love Aunty Kristine xoxo

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