This week we have been free writing and so I have chosen to write about the school holidays. Please read my writing.
What did you do in the school holidays?
Thursday, 2 May 2019
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Kia ora Riley,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Rhys from yaldhurst model school I am a year 6. I really like the way you described all the fun you had at mega air. I think you did a really good job on your story and I hope you write more.
I think you could improve on your writing by not using and so many times. Do you like mega air the best or flip out?.
King regards
Rhys